Vampire Synopsis:
Scene begins with a sharp back and forth editing from when a young woman in her past with her encounter of vampires and present; what she has turned in to. This woman has no friends, family and does not speak to anyone as she pants like a dog to the woods. People stop and stare at her gracious beauty and know that there is something different about her but just cannot point out how contrasting she is to normal human beings.
Another scene begins with a young man celebrating his nephew’s birthday having fun with upbeat music and laughter of kids in the background. After the party, the nephew asks if he can go outside to play. Few hours later, the nephew is nowhere to be seen and is then put amongst the other 75 children that are missing in the neighbourhood.
This woman has something very peculiar about her character as she likes to kidnap young children and use them for her own advantage of being a blood sucking vampire. People in the neighbourhood begin to realise that a large number of children are starting to go missing. She is on her way to the woods, she comes across a human that is in danger and is on the urge of death, resentful to whom she is and who her character may be, she felt the need to help the young man and save him from the misery of death. This young man later ends up in the hospital and has flashing images of the vampire that saved him. He goes out on a quest to meet this woman to thank her. Little does he know that he will find out that his missing nephew’s evidence of death is lurking in her house…
Your synopsis is pretty awesome!It's quite unique in terms of your characters; making the woman both the villain and the hero by saving the MAN. So, does he find her? Do they fall in love? Is the man the guy who was celebrating his nephew's birthday?! :O
ReplyDelete'sharp back and forth editing from when a young woman in her past with her encounter of vampires and present' : montage/flashback lol
ReplyDeleteOMG it's so good. I like the little twist at the end, it's really interesting. Could have included more on what happens near the end ;) and focus less on shots/editing in the beginning. Otherwise; good schtuff xo
WWW: you described the editing and you set the scene, you use really descriptive words which make it sound interesting, really good storyline. well done!! :)
ReplyDeletewww: very interesting story line, make me anxious to know what will happen next. Good description of the scene setting to give the reader a clear idea.
ReplyDeleteebi: more use of media terminology :D
this is a really good idea, original, not like the twilight crap! :)
ReplyDeletei would agree with palwasha with using media terminology.